Another Excerpt From Go To Hell

I’m sorry, but I lied to you.

Go To Hell will never be funny.

However, it will be a book, and it might even be good. I’m doing Camp NaNoWriMo this July, and I’m expanding and fleshing out Go To Hell. I wrote this section and immediately thought that this was a book that deserved to be written. Which is good, because I’ve nearly abandoned this story so many times because I couldn’t quite figure out what to write about in its vast world.

So, those two parts of Go To Hell that were posted on my blog here were two thirds of the perspectives on the story, and are being edited, rearranged, and fleshed out. Here’s something completely different in the same universe, which will be about a third of the book.

If you love Go To Hell, I might try to self-publish it in a way that makes it as easy as possible for me to distribute books to readers. If you hate Go To Hell, that will still happen, but you’ll only be seeing excerpts from it one more time on my blog, so, just deal with it.

Here’s Go To Hell Excerpts, Chapter 2.

Order and Chaos

You could call this an experimental draft. It’s a draft because I think that it needs a lot of rewriting. It’s experimental because I experimented with it, because the style and the plot is unusual. It’s thirty-one pages long. And if you want to see some very good writing mixed in with some problems, I would recommend reading it. That being said, this is another one of the summer projects. I am going to work on it, fix it, make edits and changes. If you cannot wait, please, read it! And if you are a writer or reader who want to read this and give me some pointers on how to make it better, I would be very, very thankful.

Here you’ll meet Susan, a woman trapped in her city in a crisis, at the point when the world ends, and the personifications of Order and Chaos finally decide to fight. Because Order is not just organized, but restrictive and cold, and Chaos is not just rebellion but also a loss of control, and a feverish madness. My only goal here is for you to feel things.

Here’s Order and Chaos.